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Fading, Floating, Or Fluttering Words Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date: 09/23/2023

never will I forget hearing your assuaging earful a pocketful of moons ago; merely four words that quelled a storm of anxiety raging within me. so terrifying, you see, when they're held in abeyance, a torture among tortures when kept in suspense with them. i recall telling you I loved you in the hush of nightfall bracing myself for perhaps an awkward silence; a gale-force wind that would've blown down the foundation of my painstakingly constructed dreams. i had an inkling your feelings mirrored mine, but I just had to be sure! when I heard you reply... "I love you, too," i finally released my suspended breath as my heart sung hallelujah! i couldn't describe how good that moment felt if I tried. i could breathe again. my joy knew no bounds! the kingdom of heaven came crumbling down to the Earth, falling atop my head like confetti. my spirits floated on cloud nine when I knew you loved me just as much. i still am elevated.

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Date: 10/9/2023 2:26:00 PM
Edward, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your creative style, Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/11/2023 2:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for the awesome feedback, visit and congratulations, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 9/25/2023 11:44:00 PM
What exultation after a moment of escalating tension. I can relate to your feeling, though I haven't experienced it myself. I see in my mind's eye, you levitating from the ground and floating in cloud nine! Beautiful poem, dear Edward. All the Best.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/26/2023 4:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and well-wishes, Valsa:-)
Date: 9/24/2023 4:14:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning and soul warming, i can feel the excitement and the butterflies , and how one floats when in love so well depicted. So many lines caught my eyes, especially “ pocketful of moons ago” “ i had an inkling your feelings mirrored mine” ahh! And those last lines, i saw almost confettis and all that, a magical moment youve described! Love this. Goodluck for the contest
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/24/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thank you very much for the visit and awesome feedback, Inky:-) Most appreciated, my friend.
Date: 9/23/2023 3:54:00 PM
This is such a divine, romantic poem Edward. ‘A pocketful of moons ago’- what a gorgeous description! You capture the desired, so waited for, moments so well of having your love returned to you when you heard the three most important words of all. So lovely! I love happy endings. Enjoyed reading this delightful heartfelt poem. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/23/2023 4:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for the visit, wonderful feedback and well-wishes, Christina:-)
Date: 9/23/2023 10:48:00 AM
Hello Edward this is so romantic. Blessings my friend. /Darlene\
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/23/2023 11:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Darlene:-) Blessings to you, too, my friend.
Date: 9/23/2023 8:46:00 AM
How delightfully romantic a poem, my friend. Much enjoyed the charming voice of your poem, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/23/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for your continued visit and support, Vijay:-) Most obliged, my friend.

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