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FALL and c a s c a d e with me, fandango and follow, f e e l the wind lifting you, flutter on magic wings. Fanciful f a i r y t a l e, forests and streams f l o w i n g, faraway from all LIFE. ____________________________________ September 23, 2016 Pleisades Verse For the contest, Pleisades F sponsor, Kim Merryman First Place

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/27/2016 8:53:00 AM

The best always win:) excellent Pleiades, Constance:) congratulations:) a 7+++ for this beauty:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 2:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great wins poems, B.W. :) - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley

Date: 9/26/2016 8:51:00 PM

Very nice! Congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:12:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Constance I knew this would place highly for you:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/26/2016 4:31:00 PM

Congrats, Constance, onyour win with this lovely poem. Agnes

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/26/2016 4:20:00 PM

I felt the floating, Constance! A very creative Pleiades. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/26/2016 4:15:00 PM

Constance, you chose a unique subject and then fleshed it out with exquisite imagination. A beautiful write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/23/2016 4:16:00 PM

Your imagination is working well today, Constance. Sometimes I dream I can fly and I love the feeling. Good luck in contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2016 1:27:00 PM

I see the words dancing off the page Constance this is so beautiful:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx