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Rays of sun lit mist beam faintly through the trees. Like a sleepy ghost, steam softly dances off the silvery water of the river, its stage. Within tall blades of grass an audience of branches float. Silent, sweet morning drifting in a boat. 7/24/15 -for shweet contest

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Date: 8/1/2015 10:37:00 PM
I drift in my comfy chair here on my computer everyday. Big congrats on your win! A7
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Date: 7/30/2015 2:56:00 PM
As an inveterate canoeist/angler I almost feel I'm there, thanks for sharing. Congrats on your win and thanks for visiting my site.
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Date: 7/30/2015 2:29:00 PM
Very pretty images here, Lee! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:26:00 PM
How shweet this is! Love the amazing imagery! Lee, congratulations to you on a well-deserved win! Pandita
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:36:00 AM
Oh I like that description of fog-like a sleepy ghost-Nicely done imagery
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Date: 7/30/2015 4:05:00 AM
wonderful imagery - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/30/2015 3:44:00 AM
Lee, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/30/2015 2:32:00 AM
hi Lee, what a sweet sail and win... Congratulations... LINDA
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Date: 7/29/2015 11:59:00 PM
Wonderful write Lee! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/29/2015 11:57:00 PM
Lee, this is simply beautiful. The next to last line, incredible. You got marked down for using it's instead of its. Other than that, nearly flawless work. Looking at it again, I wish I had placed it one spot higher up!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:10:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for the explanation : ) I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!. I'm so happy you liked my poem and thank you for my placement in your fun shweet contest! ~lee
Date: 7/28/2015 3:50:00 PM
I love the simplistic imagery Lee hugs 7
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:38:00 AM
Lee, "an audience of branches float" thats one great line.. :D! beautiful!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/25/2015 6:17:00 AM
A beautiful image of a sweet morning. Good luck in the contest. ~~Darlene
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:23:00 PM
There is such beautiful imagery in this creative write, Lee! I really enjoyed it :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 7:25:00 PM
Good imagery good luck in the contest a7.hugs Eve
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:33:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for your awesome visit to my work..Sara
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