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Flipped Hourglass

Emotions vibrate through the heavens Crying out desirous of a love Beseeching it’s warm embrace Yet it goes unfelt, unheard, unanswered Hope for a pragmatic love just a dream Expectations being preconceived For the universe could not grasp the greatness of her yearning, This she had come to grips with Because surely none could provide fulfillment Melancholy settles over her, as she carefully wraps her love, back up in the ribbons of longing , placing it into a box of disappointment Sitting upon her bed of sorrow, absent of emotions For tears dried up years ago and only out of habit did she release its vibration into the heavens Like a flipped hourglass time seemed never to advance For she knew she would remain a castaway on this island where love seemed not welcomed 2/3/22 Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/26/2022 8:48:00 AM
I agree with Andrea -- "wow" indeed! Superb piece of Free Verse poetry. I am genuinely impressed with this piece, Brenda...this is really impressive writing. With lots of affection. :) john
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Date: 2/17/2022 2:18:00 PM
Both life and love can bring disappointment, Brenda, but we need to put those behind us and look to the future with renewed commitment. Every castaway has a chance of meeting a "Friday"! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 2/4/2022 6:42:00 PM
wow, I think this is best one I've viewed on the theme so far. I really love where you took it, Brenda. Wish mine were that great (not posted yet)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/4/2022 8:39:00 PM
Andrea yours are slways amazing lol! I need to go read it! But thank you for your kind words!:)
Date: 2/3/2022 5:21:00 PM
Brenda, good to read you again. A very fine melancholy, heart-on-the-sleeve write. Thanks for the visit today, hope all is well in your world.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/4/2022 8:38:00 PM
John thank you so much! It feels good to be back again! And of course what kinda person would I be if I didn’t stop to read!;)

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