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Flimsy Bright

from my cupboard fall all the stripey flimsy bright things I used to wear some dull dreary mourning tide hath made me drab as ashes © Gail Foster 2016

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Date: 5/6/2016 6:15:00 PM
enjoyed your form of Tanka ,enjoyed this one, thank you for sharing ~~SKAT
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Gail Foster
Date: 5/10/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work, SKAT. Short verse forms are great for describing moments like this. All the best to you x

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