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Flight of Icarus

With wax and feathers Strapped to his arms, Icarus took flight like a bird, Escaping Crete, The labyrinth far below. Forgetting his father’s advice, Feeling freedom, Like a moth to a light, He soared towards the sun. The wax melted and he moulted, Then down he plummeted, To the ocean below, Where the waves washed over his corpse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/6/2011 6:19:00 PM
What a sad tale. But a lesson for those who refuse to learn from the experience of others. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/4/2011 12:42:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one Jack, you have this cool way of bringing your point across ;-) lfde Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2011 11:09:00 AM
not heeding parent's advice holds true even to today Jack..nicely penned with full visual effect my friend.. a fascinating tale too.. so true..in lore luv..
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Date: 9/2/2011 1:54:00 AM
Good summary of the tale. I have a sonnet on this one myself! One day I should post it. It's quite the story, isn't it? One of my favorite old legends, this one is, well described by you.
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Date: 9/1/2011 2:34:00 PM
Wow, quite the story! I think there's a lesson here to be learned! Don't fly too close to the sun in rickety bird wings!! Great write!!
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