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Flight Lifted by the wind... flying with poetic dreams, lost in clouds I rise... beyond realms of land and sea taken home to stardust thoughts. Sandra M. Haight ~5th Place~ Contest: One Nature Tanka - Inspired By Poem Below Sponsor: Rick Parise Judged: 08/04/2016
Flight Upon the lilting breeze I fly of colored prisms and wafting dream Beyond the worries of silent need where vanishing doubt birth infinite seeds Beyond Beyond clouds rolling low where stardust vision I am taken home Upon the lilting breeze I fly by Rick Parise

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Date: 8/26/2016 2:17:00 PM
Your poem is very beautiful Sandra. Congratulations on your win! I see why you were so inspired by Rick's poem. 7 ; )
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Date: 8/8/2016 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win ...
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Date: 8/6/2016 8:32:00 AM
Rick's poem served your inspiration well, Sandra You stayed very loyal to the original. Congratulations on this deserving win! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/5/2016 7:26:00 AM
"Stardust thoughts" congratulations Sandra...
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Date: 8/5/2016 12:36:00 AM
We both chose to write on similar topics, but yours is far beautiful:) Lovely tanka with an excellent imagery:) Congratulations on your win, Sandra:)
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Date: 8/4/2016 9:42:00 PM
Hi Sandra, This is so beautiful. It flows in style and content. Nice imagery as well. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Sandra. In my mind, I kept replacing thoughts with lights -- I'm not sure why. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/4/2016 6:56:00 PM
very beautiful Sandra many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2016 6:11:00 PM
Very skillful piece Sandra...congrats on the win
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra :)
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:29:00 PM
great paraphrasing of his poem in tanka style. I did mine that way too. I did not realize we could do almost anything about nature!! BIG congrats for your win!
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Date: 8/4/2016 4:39:00 PM
Sandra, a beautiful tanka sweet lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:47:00 AM
Love your take on the theme, Sandra. It's beautiful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/3/2016 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Hope this is what Rick is looking for. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/3/2016 2:05:00 AM
Beautiful, Sandra, truly beautiful ... CayCay
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Date: 8/3/2016 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay. Hugs, Sandra

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