Flickering Candlelight

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Written: September 02, 2023 ________________________________________________________________ Flickering body Breath fuels the flame of life~ Mind's traffic glows bright Minds' discipline gleams Sparks of credo ignite thoughts~ Silent glow guides us Journey within starts Introspection sparks fairness~ Wisdom blooms with time Inward strength prevails Perseverance guides the way~ Wisdom's path unfolds

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/3/2023 9:50:00 AM

Wonderful! For & to good men, wisdom blooms with time! Have a nice time.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2023 5:38:00 AM

Words of enlightenment my friend.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/3/2023 4:39:00 AM

Wow, this is such a breathtaking and thought- provoking piece that definitely reflects a myriad spectrum of depth and feelings, how introspection helps to search within ourselves and reflect upon our ideologies and beliefs, refining our thoughts, finally blooming wisdom and then resulting in a beautiful eden of self-understanding & growth. Perseverance definitely guides the way! The image that this renders in my mind is just so deep and soothing, a brilliantly articulated piece..

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/2/2023 11:11:00 PM

I have come to love this image that you post so often.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/2/2023 11:08:00 PM

And those that don't practice introspection, do they have the spark of fairness? SP your poem describes the power of thought waves amicably, and the gaining of wisdom. I envisage the flicker as I read. Almost like a strobe entering my mind. Maybe this poem has magic powers ? I like to believe so. I guess I am in a whimsical mood.