Fleeting Sand

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Beads Of sand Twirl around In slow motion, Like white lace draping my feet in cool waves. Powdered coastline echoed of our laughter But how fleeting Was June’s quest- Time's play Gone. ------------------ Double Tetractys 2 Contest of Eve Roper Visual 2 9/10/2020

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/18/2020 5:34:00 AM

Lovely vision Nette. Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/18/2020 1:10:00 AM

An excellent take on the sand visual, Nette. Those grains of sand have truly inspired you, my friend. Congratulations on placing first. Hugs // paul

Carol Mitra

Date: 9/17/2020 9:54:00 PM

This is such an amazing write...and brings back memories of what we do with our feet playing with sand.....Refreshing Nette and Congratulations.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/17/2020 9:18:00 PM

So many beautiful images with movement like shifting sand, Nette. Very special. Many congratulatinso on your top podium win. I love the end line especially since I'm having a hard time letting go of summer this year! Blessings my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2020 6:42:00 PM

Lovely write, Nette.. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/10/2020 1:17:00 PM

Your poetry always enthrals me. I can almost picture your play on the beach. Excellent

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/10/2020 12:43:00 PM

Splendid entry for the contest, nette - I predict a top win for this beauty. Bob