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Fleeing Irma

FLEEING IRMA spotlight moon, full, like an Old Testament cloud, leading Floridians forth, not into the desert, but away from the wrath of Irma. bumper to bumper, neighbors from pilot to caboose, illuminated in each other’s flood beams. testiness and pride put aside, as fleeing cars, in camaraderie, brave the calm before the storm. like the Israelites, they leave behind the homes they know, put themselves in the hands of God. many have family and friends north of their beloved peninsula, an unintended visit, a warm haven, not a picnic nor a vacation, but each pulls themselves up, for our Southern neighbors are not of the craven sort. those who choose to live near the sea, with its beauty and fortitude, know how to batten down the hatches. hammocks left behind will tangle, and hug palm trees, suffering the loss of their occupants. hotels, with never ending vacationers, takes a much needed rest. God believes in rest, sometimes a seven year sabbath, even when the soul forgets its place. we pray, even north of the path, in stillness, we must, in gratitude, never taking for granted, lest we too find ourselves seeking solace elsewhere. godspeed our tanned Peninsula friends. godspeed and bless, with safety, tenacity, and love as we reel you in. 9/8/2017

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Date: 9/10/2017 11:37:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Kim, so deserving on an awesome poem. Terrifying times though ...Maria
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Date: 9/10/2017 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD! My thoughts and prayers go out to all whom are affected by this disaster.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 10:20:00 PM
Thank you! Hopefully all will be well.
Date: 9/10/2017 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on POTD. It is written beautifully, describing such a sad and terrifying time!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda! Yes, indeed scary!
Date: 9/10/2017 3:35:00 PM
Many congratulations on POTD kim a very timely theme:-( hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 4:22:00 PM
Thanks, Jan XX
Date: 9/10/2017 1:13:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Kim! So glad you're now in a safe place. God willing all Floridians will survive the wrath of Irma. Take care*Hugs*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks, Edward! I was witness to the Floridian exodus. Hopefully here in Georgia we won't get the brunt of the storm. I do pray for those affected by the storm path. Praying for all and especially friends and family.
Date: 9/10/2017 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim, on POTD ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/10/2017 11:45:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on a sad POTD...hopefully all shall be safe...god bless to all concerned...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 11:50:00 AM
Thank you! I know! I've never seen such a "caravan" God bless and keep them all! <3 Kim
Date: 9/10/2017 10:37:00 AM
Congrats on potd, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 11:24:00 AM
Thanks, Dale!
Date: 9/10/2017 10:07:00 AM
Timely, of course, and beautifully written both realistically and encouraging.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thanks, Sunlite!
Date: 9/10/2017 8:51:00 AM
Well written Kim, congratulations on POTD honors...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 9/10/2017 7:34:00 AM
This is so wonderfully written Kim, a timely piece, a blessing, compassion, lovely to read you this potd this morning :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen!
Date: 9/10/2017 7:07:00 AM
- A terrible natural catastrophe, Kim - Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 8:14:00 AM
For sure! So much disaster! Thank you. Kim <3
Date: 9/10/2017 6:39:00 AM
Congrats Kim--lovely piece and POTD as well!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 9/10/2017 5:44:00 AM
Way to go Kim for this treasure and POTD. This is such a devastating storm it is hard to imagine.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 8:15:00 AM
I know! Watching these reporters! Nuts! Thanks, Phil!
Date: 9/10/2017 5:07:00 AM
I have friends in Florida, this is s horrific timr. You have written an excellent poem. Congrats on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! I know many in Florida too! Some are here in Georgia! My sis's in-law is worried. Her home is on the West coast of Florida. :(
Date: 9/10/2017 2:19:00 AM
I am also hoping my friends are safe... Great poem Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2017 8:19:00 AM
Prayers for Florida! My brother just moved out of Tampa a few months ago. Thanks, Darren! <3
Date: 9/8/2017 4:28:00 PM
This is so well written Kim, as you my thoughts are with the poor people experiencing this awful disaster.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2017 4:32:00 PM
Absolutely! Thanks, Roy!
Date: 9/8/2017 11:42:00 AM
This is gorgeous and moving! Fave
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2017 4:08:00 PM
Thanks, Dale!

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