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Flawless Crying Out

My lives been meek and scary.I look back and it gets real hairy. I look foreword and it gets grey with some white.My friends are beside me following my steps, I don't know where to lead lives got me best. I got on my knees and cried out to God."oh God help my path is blocked".I got back up and every things white,my path is straight and my friends follow to join the fight.

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Date: 1/19/2011 12:30:00 PM
I love this piece...please keep up the great work
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