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Flavor of Dusk

FLAVOR OF DUSK Comes the dusk -- a bittersweet mystery: Sweet flavor of its cold-salted blade of disappointment. Disappointing, disappearing light where do you go? Oh, go from me, shiver of atavistic fear, For I fear the sharp cuts darkness’s return may bring; Though it brings your arms and tender caress. Caress me now, O last sweet rays of sun ! My sun, return to me, my beautiful fading light: Light my path and show me hope for the good. Goodnight. But then good morrow and we wake. * Oh, wake this night my strength, and stir joy - For joy in the morning comes. ** . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . Note * This line is based on John Donne’s THE GOOD MORROW ** This line is adapted from Psalm 30 : 5 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck 7 August 2012 Entered in Nette Onclaud’s Contest WREATH ON THE FLAVOR OF DUSK

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Date: 8/13/2012 2:24:00 PM
KC.. just wondering if you wore your glasses when you wrote this, lol.. can't find the link between these 2 lines: Comes the dusk -- a bittersweet MYSTERY:/ Sweet flavor of its cold-salted blade of disappointment./.. or am i the one who needs glasses?.. good luck!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:17:00 PM
Sydney, FAB! Stole a moment and read this. So glad I did. Enjoyable read. Though I don't think it necessary for contest, a wreath can come full form, circular, hence its name. You could end the first line... bittersweet and comely, so the last line connects to the first... but I like it so much as is. Nette's door is always open ;-) Hope to see this high up that winners list! Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:13:00 AM
Sydney, I was very moved by this, in the beauty of your words, and feeling! X Peace, Ruby
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Date: 8/7/2012 7:06:00 AM
Ruby....thanks....you are very kind with your remarks.....I am pleased that it moved you....when this happens I feel it is a job satisfactorily completed....with best wishes....Syd

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