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Flatline

stripped naked embraced in wonder as moonlight enhances sweat on the manly chest of enticement though tender are his feelings he is abandoned to silence - - - - - - - - - "Give me a Sign"-nette onclaud contest Judy Konos 5/15/15

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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/7/2015 6:39:00 PM
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Wow! Powerful imagery, Judy! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/7/2015 6:46:00 PM
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Thank you...appreciate it..
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Skat A
Date: 6/6/2015 11:23:00 PM
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Judy, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/7/2015 6:47:00 PM
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Thank you Boot Skat and Boogie...
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 6/6/2015 4:04:00 PM
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Hi Judy...thank u for the breath-taking imagery n congrats on ur win...rgds, 7habang
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 6:24:00 PM
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well thank you for your comment....appreciate it
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John Lawless
Date: 6/6/2015 3:22:00 PM
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Judy, I missed this on my daily readings and must say this is a wonderfully divergent take on the theme. It left me sitting, silent, to reflect on its depth.
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 6:25:00 PM
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Thank you John...I got the feeling he did her in! ouch....
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 6:25:00 PM
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OOPS old age caught me....I got the wrong poem....LOL..thanks for your comment
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/6/2015 1:19:00 PM
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I really liked how you did yours. I remember this one for it is a striking entry in her contest. Congrats for a well deserved win, Judy.
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 6:26:00 PM
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Thank you ....
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2015 10:17:00 AM
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Dropping back with my congrats Judy:-) Hugs jan xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 6:27:00 PM
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Thank You
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/6/2015 9:51:00 AM
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Wow, sad, but so powerful for the theme, Judy. Congrats on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 6:27:00 PM
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Thank you Sandra
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/6/2015 9:41:00 AM
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Congratulations on this much deserved win, Judy. Your clever muse led you out of the box...and you were wise to follow! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/7/2015 9:17:00 AM
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:) Both our entries finished in 'silence'!!
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 8:50:00 PM
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Thank you Paul I'll be glad when my muse catches half way up with yours!
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 1:44:00 PM
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What a unique take on the theme Judy - stark sad imagery:-( good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 8:51:00 PM
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Thank you Jan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/18/2015 12:18:00 AM
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oh my, this one seems so sad, Judy. I think you did a good job of making one that is different. Very original and quite an image. Soupmail.
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 8:51:00 PM
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Thank you Andrea

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