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I've put some lime pickle with my lunch Just to reset my senses (and because I like it) I may have eaten a large quantity of chocolate too (but that was because it was there) Why am I writing this down? Well, it's just to see where a poem might want to go today. Starting without an idea of greatness but the mundane I won't impress and I'm writing with tons of interruptions and noise There's a random full stop midway - that needed sorting (stuff it) I'm going to guess there's not a poem lurking plus the dog's on my knee and he's trumped - it's a distraction too far See you next time, should you chance it

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Date: 8/8/2023 6:16:00 AM
This bubbles life, immediate and just fascinating. You just grab the moment DD.
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Date: 8/8/2023 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Paul - the concept of the poem writing itself in a direction I hadn't considered fascinated me but didn't actually transpire - I probably needed more lime pickle :D
Date: 8/8/2023 12:23:00 AM
Don't delete.Your humanity is the Very thing we all love about you.p.s. You have thrown a craving on me for a pickle.I believe I shall indulge.
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Date: 8/8/2023 12:47:00 AM
Haha pickles are a true temptation - I need to get into making them myself, I can see myself now with little jars and fancy lids haha :D

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