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Flashlight

Ah! Drop your prejudice and hear I lost my love, fortnights ago My weeping tears dried-up Searching for my last name. With solo flashlight wandering Among scattered droplets of war. First Place in HEXASTICH IT Poetry Contest sponsored by nette onclaud

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John Hamilton
Date: 6/3/2020 9:09:00 PM
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Very touching write Jenish, searching for my last name...nice! Glad this garnered a win for you!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/5/2020 12:35:00 AM
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Thank you John..Takecare always...
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/3/2020 4:48:00 AM
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A belated congratulations on your win, Jenish.. A meaningful and inpirational verse! Really enjoyed reading this wonderful gem, my friend.. Many blessings and stay safe!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/5/2020 12:35:00 AM
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Thank you Robertina for your delightful words..
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/30/2020 4:22:00 PM
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A very striking, sad poem, Jenish. Congratulations on a very merited first place. Regards // paul
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:16:00 AM
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Thank you for your kind support Paul..
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2020 12:20:00 PM
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An emotional piece, congrats on your win Jenish:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:15:00 AM
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Thank you Jan..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 11:07:00 AM
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So happy to see you on top Jenish! Congratulations on your splendid win :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:15:00 AM
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Thank you Aditi.. Happy to have a friend like you sharing the list..
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/30/2020 11:01:00 AM
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' writing down the bones', jenish...unique theme for the main word as well...congrats on your top spot in my contest...huggs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:14:00 AM
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Thank you Nette for that fantastic contest.. And thanks a lot for my placement..
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David Mohn
Date: 5/30/2020 10:59:00 AM
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Congratulations Jenish...grandly written :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:13:00 AM
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Thank you David..
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Joseph May
Date: 5/30/2020 10:13:00 AM
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A somber verse, well penned Jenish, Congrats on your win
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:12:00 AM
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Thank you Joseph..
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John Watt
Date: 5/30/2020 12:51:00 AM
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Searching for my last name. Very deep and touching, Jenish. Congratulations on your #1 win ~ John
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:12:00 AM
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Thank you John...
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/30/2020 12:33:00 AM
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A sentimental write. Congrats.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:12:00 AM
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Thank you Mohan..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/27/2020 2:13:00 PM
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Very emotional write Jenish. Wish you all the best :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/28/2020 1:02:00 AM
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Thank you Aditi..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/25/2020 6:58:00 AM
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Feels deep, meaningful: My weeping tears dried-up..Searching for my last name.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 10:37:00 AM
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Thank you Vijay for your kind support.. Stay safe...

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