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Flames of Bonds

As the flames a blazed and the torches illuminated the crying shouts of the night Like steeples of lonely souls on shattered islands yearning for lifeboats Like reddish cherry drowned in a sea of blood entwining sweetness with sourly fluid Like a naked smile in a funeral of the dead hiding sadness behind a lying face searching for strength New bonds created amidst of war like glistening stars in the dying space. 12/3/2012

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Date: 6/10/2015 5:32:00 PM
Best wishes on the win here Sami..'
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:55:00 AM
SAMI. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 9:45:00 AM
such powerful imagery congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2015 2:49:00 AM
very descriptive Sami congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:20:00 AM
Sami, A great Free -for-all winning poem. *CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. have a great day, TA TA TA * Linda
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:00:00 AM
very nice........... skat
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Date: 7/3/2013 7:02:00 PM
Sami this is fabulous. Never so well expressed. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/20/2013 8:24:00 AM
New Bonds created amidst of War! Excellent....and now I shall read more...
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Date: 12/18/2012 12:59:00 PM
Sami, your Free Verse is very deep with emotion and thought provoking, I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Constance
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Sami Helbaoui
Date: 12/19/2012 1:33:00 AM
I thank you so much for reading it and commenting.
Date: 12/17/2012 4:09:00 PM
once again..love the ending line... war like glistening stars in the dying space'' pd
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Sami Helbaoui
Date: 12/19/2012 1:32:00 AM
It's great to know that you liked it, I'm grateful thank you
Date: 12/17/2012 2:59:00 PM
Sami, now this is fantastic, very well crafted...David
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Date: 12/19/2012 1:30:00 AM
I
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Sami Helbaoui
Date: 12/19/2012 1:30:00 AM
I am pleased that you found it fantastic, thank you for reading.
Date: 12/3/2012 9:29:00 PM
Sami, love the verse...pd
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