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(inspired by Casarah Nance) Remember- When a burning passion runs amok and leaves you smouldering in the rubble that a heart's made from the shape of two teardrops and therein lies the trouble.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/25/2015 1:18:00 AM

G'day Viv... very wise words indeed Viv. I guess some of us live and learn on the words of your poem. Thanks mate - Lindsay

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/25/2015 3:32:00 AM

Cheers, Laurie. Viv

Anthony Beesley

Date: 3/20/2015 8:40:00 PM

Short and sweet and savagely to the point

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/25/2015 3:32:00 AM

Thanks for popping by, Anthony. Regards, Viv

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/19/2015 7:38:00 AM

Superb. I really loved this write of yours. It touched me. Thanks for your visits to my work. Much appreciated.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/19/2015 8:43:00 PM

Thanks, Jade, and keep on smiling and doing what you do x

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/19/2015 2:02:00 AM

Wow, def a 7. My favorite line "that a heart's made from the shape of two teardrops and therein lies the trouble."

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/19/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thanks, njeri. Viv x