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'flaky Memories'

flaky memories selective priority tie up his spirit while drifting further away snuff out his love with distance ©144830052014

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James Fraser

Date: 11/19/2014 3:50:00 PM

Memories sure do become flaky, fine poetry Wilma, James :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/5/2014 8:49:00 AM

flaky memories are a problem. They are freaky. It's tough to gather the fragments again. I have enjoyed your poem. Love Wilma...rajat

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/4/2014 12:57:00 PM

Loving this Tanka of yours...and beautiful avatar!! Hugs :)

Dave Timperley

Date: 6/2/2014 3:56:00 AM

Flaky Memories, well, that's me alright. Love this write. God Bless. D.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2014 11:41:00 AM

Missy--you looking Gorgeous on your avatar! Woot-wuw-- ok I do not know how to whistle, even in print. Really like this tanka of yours... shuckers... now you got me wondering again! Me and my runaway imagination, got this all drawn out in my weird head. But yes, sometimes maybe distance can do good. So hard, but it can do good in its own time. Loving the conviction in the last line, if only it were that easy to do though! Mwahugs and so great to see you writing again! Me? Hmm, all in my head, my fuzzy fuzzy head.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2014 8:43:00 AM

- Wooow .... well written, Wilma - Hope all is well with you. - Wishing you a beautiful weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)