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Fixation

FIXATION There was music of course Not the usual sort of girl at least in my fixated estimation Jump rope “Winnie the Pooh” Teddy bear These survivors unto high school and through Rather a “flower child’ she It wasn’t the way she walked although? She had a dancer’s spring in her step She wore no perfume Wasn’t the way she dressed but then I never saw her best Ah! but that long brown hair a strand always in her face (one eye’s worth) And the way it hid her priceless blush Yes! more than anything the blush! The question must arise – Was she beautiful? Was she pretty? Cute? The eyes The mouth The nose High cheek bones All must be in fine proportion and refined chiseled - But? with her who could tell? She had a way of inserting herself (thrusting is too course a word) of waltzing right in! of quietly mesmerizing someone She knew how almost silently bold she was A ballerina on stage Every eye on her and she knew it! It was all about her but I didn’t care She looked at the floor yet looked through your eyes and into your heart No demure No batting of lashes No swinging of hips No soft-talk honey Oh what a small crowded room with just the two of us She had that natural mascara Lips needing no paint Almost a Middle East complexion (the basket with snake) (the oboe) (sitar) Teen virtuoso And I prisoner of the mind the enchanted moment Movement Music Fixation

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Date: 8/1/2010 8:29:00 PM
DAVER ~HoW R U !! I Find YOUR pOem Muncho CUTE : ) ~SKAT
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:45:00 PM
So good to know this was "Real!"
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:36:00 PM
wow, you outdid yourself with this one, Daver. Was she a real fixation from your teen years, this one? Sounds like some enchantress and au natural. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/28/2010 6:14:00 PM
Very descriptive write about what reads like a beautiful young lady that had you mesmerized...Enjoyed ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Lunester is a sleeping aid that can cause the person to sleep walk, drive while asleep, be asleep but not know they are asleep..It was named for the Luna Moth...Sara
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Date: 7/28/2010 4:14:00 PM
Well you are taking me for a ride today Daver! This is a beauty. Like the way yo0u take us with you. Okay ..I would fall in love with her too with this description! Masterfully done, amigo.
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:52:00 AM
Lovely,Its seems she was a natural sweety,cute,cute poem,I love the way you write and I might be a grown up,but I love 'Winnie the pooh':)loovely!C.C
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:08:00 AM
A very cute and witty poem Daver, really enjoyed your poem.. I love all them lines,, Did not know you had this one in you..Trully enjoyed,..p.d.
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