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Five Seconds

The tiny box of three Quiet in inconsequence Cowers to bored night Theory picket fence Two fly ice Chosen expertise and calm Distress the daily grind Confused in sweated palm The faithful forty-nine Hope and safety fed Now speak unwitting blank In bitter contact red The suffering alive Peak through bewildered eye Barred to understand Such loss in seconds Five

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/28/2009 2:21:00 PM
Awesome tribute to Flight 3407, nice write, James
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Date: 3/24/2009 12:47:00 PM
It creates the eery sensation in me of a robot telling this story...and I like it!
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Date: 2/17/2009 2:00:00 PM
Smile~I really like the depth from which this write seems to have come from dear Michele ~Along with the style of its writers chosen words~amid the heart of compassion as I see within Your note below....Smile....my very favorite types of writers actually~those whom look beyond themselves~and are thus always a blessing unto others and the world in which they live!!! "Excellent Write Michele!!!"~"Much Warmth & Blessings To You & All You Love, John!":).
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Date: 2/17/2009 12:13:00 PM
Rest in Peace Flight 3407 victims.
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