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His Cheatin' Heart We meet so sweet First kiss pure bliss Red rose propose Vows said he's dead He strayed I flayed #____#____#____# October 24th, 2016 A Footles Contest by: Jan Allison

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/19/2016 2:05:00 PM

Good footle, Lin, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/2/2016 9:33:00 AM

This one was fun, Lin:) glad to see it scored high:)congratulations:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 5:04:00 PM

You did a good one on cheatin' heart!! Good to see you on this list, Lin. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2016 1:29:00 PM

- Congrats on your great first place in the contest, Lin - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2016 1:14:00 PM

Many congrats on your top spot Lin I loved this one and the pic is perfect:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 10/29/2016 8:05:00 AM

Poor guy Lin, HaHa.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2016 8:11:00 AM

Poor guy my footle! haha Thanks, James.

Darren White

Date: 10/25/2016 7:59:00 AM

Wonderful. And that cartoon to go with it. Hilarious :) Good luck

Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2016 9:21:00 AM

Thank you very much, Darren.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/24/2016 9:18:00 AM

Nice one, Lin. I sense a little contempt. The sad part is, most men are pigs and they know it.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/24/2016 9:22:00 AM

lol Jan wanted funny ~ she got funny. I wasn't a victim of a cheating husband and wouldn't have flayed anyone, but the thought may have occurred to me a time or twenty. Thanks for reading and commenting, Danny.