Five Fabulous Footles For Contest

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NO FUN IN THE SUN Ocean notion ! Swimsuit pursuit Beach wear despair ! Avail a sale Appraise the maze Undress distress Critique' is bleak Frumpy bumpy Designed maligned Too small too tall Too slim Too grim Belly jelly Suppress excess Behind unkind From rear Some tears The thighs the sighs Brutal futile!! Buy none Bye fun !! No sun No fun !! Beached whale Bleached, pale !! :( _______________________________ 6/8/15 For Five Fabulous Footles Contest Sponsored by Jan Allison

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Thomas Martin

Date: 6/24/2015 9:04:00 AM

Excellent, stupendous, marvelous and it's good too, Carrie. Thanks for visiting my poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 11:32:00 PM

I can relate!! Congratulations.(for the win, not the troubles in the dressing room. hahaha) anyway, I don't believe this is YOU, carrie!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/11/2015 4:40:00 PM

aw funny footle collection!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/11/2015 2:58:00 PM

The whole series is absolutely hilarious but the last line? Roll on the floor funny! LOVE the cartoon and the perfect rhyme in each footle too...Congrats - Tim

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 2:56:00 PM

awesome

Cupids Arrow

Date: 6/9/2015 10:09:00 AM

These are great...and the last one a side splitter

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2015 9:45:00 AM

don;t we all try to slim down for that summer flaunt?.. so clever, carrie, lol.. huggs