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Fishing With My Pa

The sun squeaks over the horizon, the night falls and day arises. And like a young child I was once before I held my papa's hand and head for the door. Ready- to grasp the slimy worms in the coffee colored dirt that squirms! Ready- to mounch on beef jerky from a cheap old store and fish on a lake and reach to the sea floor. The ripples of the water were like music you could watch and the tree talked as me and pa took a sip from our scotch and whistle to the noises in the air while rocking on the boat to the moment we share. And over time- the night begins to steal the day, and the days says good bye- like a person would to god as the prey. Colors of the sunset were a bit blurry from that scotch- but being there was fun to watch all the memories that sooned to fade of all the best times he and I made back when I was four, when he taught me how to fish- as we head for the door, that was something I dearly missed.

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Date: 3/24/2009 8:09:00 PM
haha. yes, dont ask why in my poem i had a four year old drink scotch! but it happened :P lol. :) thank you for your comments.
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:08:00 PM
I was thinking why would a 4 year old be drinking alcohol lol:P But I really loved your poem, it was awesome:P
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