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Fishing Days

It’s 5 am, we sneak out of the house My brother and I, as quiet as a mouse To his red bike, where I sit on the cross bar Trusting my brother, we won’t go too far. Put the worm on the hook, wrap it round well Or it will wiggle off, and the fish it will tell Watch the float as it bobs, and pull it in gent-ly That how my brother taught fishing to me. Always sneaking out, fishing in the dark Racing on his red bike, we thought it a lark. He made me dig up the worms, for the fishing bait But I wouldn’t squeal, no, that was never my fate Holding both fishing rods, I hung on real tight He promised he would teach me to use it just right. In the river we found we loved to fish best Often paddling in water right up to our chest. My brother, he stopped taking me fishing with him I always caught the fish; he said it was a sin. Then came the day girls were more interesting than fish Our fishing days were over, it was never my wish. So anyone with a rod that they will let me use I’ll sit on your crossbar, or saddle if you choose Teach me to fish and to cast it with skill And I’ll get your worms up, I promise I will. © ~GG~ 14/11/2012 Contest Entry:

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Date: 12/16/2012 11:20:00 AM
yours was so adorable. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/16/2012 11:21:00 AM
thanks Andy, my brother was quite adorable too lol xx
Date: 12/15/2012 7:49:00 AM
Mandy, Congrats, this one is superb!! Jag
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Date: 12/15/2012 6:59:00 AM
Congrats on your great win..Way to go...Sara
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Date: 12/14/2012 2:27:00 PM
What a cute story this is, Mandy!! Congratulations!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/15/2012 3:56:00 AM
Thanks Carrie love and all true xx
Date: 12/14/2012 10:10:00 AM
You are a fisherwoman at heart Mandy... congratulations on your win. YarnSpinner
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/15/2012 3:57:00 AM
No yarn Robert my friend all true xx
Date: 12/14/2012 5:33:00 AM
congrats on a great win Mandy
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/14/2012 6:38:00 AM
Thanks Joseph xx
Date: 12/13/2012 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place in my contest...Seren
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:19:00 PM
MandyStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/19/2012 12:44:00 PM
Enjoyable verse! I would like to go fishing again myself. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:58:00 PM
cute cute cute, Mandy!!! Yep, I took some health store pills today but what I really need are those pain killer meds they won't prescribe to people unless you just got out of surgery. ahahaha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/14/2012 5:42:00 PM
Very interestingly stated!! Enjoyed reading!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/15/2012 12:44:00 AM
thanks Jim xx
Date: 11/14/2012 2:56:00 PM
wow, again a story in a poem, which just draws one in and lives every word.. just love this, good luck in contest... P.S have you wrote something similar to this before, i wonder?
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:31:00 PM
no not that I recall xx
Date: 11/14/2012 1:09:00 PM
Lol, too cute, Mandy.
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