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Fish Out of Water (Pisces Dude)

I once knew a compassionate man who couldn't survive on dry land he was sensitive and kind helped me find peace of mind with him a spiritual quest began Pisces Freak I Am March~17th

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James Fraser

Date: 9/28/2010 12:51:00 PM

Many congratulations Rick on your win in pd's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Rick in P. D.'S contest "Zodiac Race" Love,Carol

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2010 7:29:00 PM

RICK, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN A JoB WELL DoNE, ENJoYED YoUR ENTRY 4 P.D's ZoDIAC CoNTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/26/2010 9:58:00 AM

nice one Rick, congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/26/2010 5:08:00 AM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Rick

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/26/2010 4:29:00 AM

Hi there Pisces guy :) dropping by again to say congrats on being among pd's winners :) enjoyed reading this again, I could definitely relate to it (ok not on being a guy part, but being the pisces part lol--haha you know what I mean) -- nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/26/2010 2:12:00 AM

Rick, Congratulations!! Thanks for a job well done, enjoyed your entry. Had fun reading,,lol,, I could have skipped the judging part, well some one had to. Glad you where among my winners,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2010 11:24:00 PM

This is really a good one. It is so descriptive of the Pisces person. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 10:41:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your big win in P.D.'s contest.. awesome piece on Pisces sign .. enjoy your sweet success my friend.. with luv this happy Sunday...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 11:24:00 PM

It sounds like you are talking about someone else but you are the Pisces, right? Yes, they are very sensitive souls! Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 11:31:00 AM

I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration ^Rick. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/8/2010 9:36:00 PM

Very nice limerick, Rick ;) I think it captures the Pisces quite well! & happy St. Patrick's Day to you on your birthday too ;) me? born on a double valentine day ;) haha let me get started on that limerick of mine...nikko :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/8/2010 7:41:00 PM

great limerick , good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2010 7:20:00 PM

Honestly Rick, March 17, is my favorite day of the year. I wait for it every January.. maybe because of the green, but i am obsessed over the day. Enjoyed your Entry,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/8/2010 7:15:00 PM

No wonder you have such a sensitive, loving nature. Pisces are wonderful people. The fish reigns! Great limerick, Rick, and best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Anthony Nutter

Date: 8/8/2010 7:13:00 PM

Nice write, enjoyed the read.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/8/2010 6:17:00 PM

enjoyed