Fish-Fry

White-hot sky Fish-fry Oceans die

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/28/2020 3:22:00 PM

I have to admit this is sadly what is happening.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2020 4:45:00 PM

They're seizing the seas...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/26/2020 2:40:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, yes this is true. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/26/2020 5:35:00 PM

Hello Gershion wolf, you are welcomed. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Happy Tuesday! :) gw

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/26/2020 10:23:00 AM

Interesting poem, Gershon, we need to take care of our environment.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 3:45:00 PM

We surely do... I remember how we (finally) attacked lake pollution in Lake Michigan. Government slammed the polluters with huge fines, and the dumping stopped... Lesson for today? ~ Not sure... :) gw

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/26/2020 8:36:00 AM

The way the sun is boiling...you might be right... believe it or not, revelation here

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 3:44:00 PM

Believe it! Here it is. Right in front of our eyes. :) gw

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/26/2020 1:06:00 AM

Such a cute poem! I smell summer!!! The rhyming scheme creates a powerful effect.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 3:39:00 PM

Sniff, sniff. I'm crying because summer came to Chicago with barely a trace of Spring beforehand... Oh, well... Thanks, JCB! :) gw