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First Waltz

her dimples show, her face aglow, as you ask her to dance that first waltz. Held in your arms swaying, your bodies close. can hear hearts beating, in time to a Strauss waltz

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Date: 6/18/2015 6:37:00 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/18/2015 1:52:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/18/2015 5:02:00 PM
Thx Jan ....Seren
Date: 6/18/2015 12:56:00 PM
nice win. SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/18/2015 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Skat.....Seren
Date: 6/18/2015 12:00:00 PM
An enjoyable and delightful first waltz, Seren! Congrats on your lovely top win. // paul
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/18/2015 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Paul, I love to waltz....Seren
Date: 6/18/2015 11:46:00 AM
Wonderful dance!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/18/2015 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Cas.... seren
Date: 6/17/2015 11:10:00 PM
I love this. Another person who did waltz same as I did. Congrats, Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/18/2015 5:04:00 PM
Waltz is do graceful, I love them....Seren
Date: 6/17/2015 5:49:00 PM
Congrats, Seren on taking 2nd place in my contest! A very sweet write! Well done! Love, Kim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/17/2015 6:19:00 PM
Thank you Kim i am chuffed....Seren
Date: 6/13/2015 6:56:00 PM
THAT IS BEAUTIFUL
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:56:00 AM
Hello Seren!! Yes -- a Johann Strauss for the first waltz is a perfect fit here indeed. Very Well-Done and a "7." Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:26:00 AM
Oh I love this! A beautiful flow and lovely tale! A 7!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/13/2015 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Anna...Seren
Date: 6/13/2015 6:00:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Seren - If it's for contest, I wish you good luck - I want to share our poem: - Two Stars Sparkle as One Soul - with you today :) - Hope your weekend will be relaxing and lovely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/13/2015 5:16:00 AM
oh how beautiful Seren - the words dance off the page:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/13/2015 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Jan.....Seren

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