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First Time

Out on the streets at night As you walk i see you Happier than the light Youre beautiful, it's true How could someone not love Those eyes so blue Its magnificence youre made of It's the world you break through I see it from a distance All that you are Its like radiance From a star No one knows how special one can be Until they finally can see You and all your beauty And it's definitely not just me I'm sure there will be others They'll say they were first I can't think of you being another's It's an unquenchable thirst Ive found im scared to know You saw me too But my heart beats slow The first time i see you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/19/2009 9:17:00 AM
the best thing of writing love poems is the first couple times one writes one on their journey to discover what love is, how they love, and how they want to be loved, dont seem like their best works, but are the foundation for some marvellous gems to come
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:48:00 PM
Interesting write in this one. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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