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First Star

After a long summer day, in a dwindling light A world switches direction, falling into the preamble of the stars When the shadows of telephone poles along our road seem to curl and follow the curve of the earth When the shadow of a tree becomes longer than ever a tree was tall When my own silhouette, so dark, fluid, and stretched... lets me walk between the dampening grass and touch the heavenly sky As the sun loses grip, hanging on by a thread on the edge of the world, my arms stretch longer,...long enough... to catch the first star that comes with twilight... _______________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/29/2009 1:48:00 PM
Clever verse Carrie, shadows are amazing to look at, but can scare the pants off you>>James
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Date: 8/28/2009 11:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your inspiring poetry today Carrie. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2009 10:38:00 AM
Carrie, I think this is outstanding work, one of the best of your poems I've read, so tender and sensitive. Thanks for your loyalty old friend. Love, daver
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Date: 8/27/2009 8:59:00 AM
A superb pre-dusk , picture , Carrie . Now I realize , I've got a 5 o'clock shadow ; look-out Gillette !! ....
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Date: 8/27/2009 8:34:00 AM
I truly love this poem..It's very creative... Thanks for sharing, Farah
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Date: 8/27/2009 8:17:00 AM
Love this one. Just to reach up and touch. Keep writing. Sara
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