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First signs of Love

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First signs of Love

What is this feeling that resides in me
I’ve felt it before, but not quiet the same
Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee

When did Cupid pass that I did not see
Certainly in this matter I have no shame
What is this feeling that resides in me

A nervousness I feel, coupled with glee
I am smiling a lot, but am not to blame
Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee

The experience makes me feel very free
But this moth has not eluded the flame
What is this feeling that resides in me

Something tells me, that I must decree
Inside there’s a wildness I can’t tame
Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee
 
I’ve felt some joy, but not of this degree
It must be real, yet it feels like a game
What is this feeling that resides in me
Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee


Written by Wayland Bunch on 1/31/2013 for Valentine contest.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:29:00 AM
    LOL... no comment i notice you win a lot... congrats!!!

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 12/11/2013 5:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have been fortunate with the contest I've entered. Thanks again for reading my work.
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Good morning Wayland:-0, Congratulations with your awesome Valentines poem *luv~PD

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/11/2013 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your continued support and feedback.
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:38:00 AM
    congrats on the placement!!!!!~ sashi

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/11/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sashi for reading my poem and for your comment
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win on this very lovely Valentines poem Wayland! love/hugs, Leonora

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/11/2013 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your lovely comment and for reading my poem.
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 3:39:00 AM
    These are difficult to write, but your reward was great! Congratulations on your win Wayland.

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Awww, this is so cute, love it, congrats on your win, love debra

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/10/2013 9:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
  1. Date: 2/10/2013 8:26:00 PM
    I fell in love with the ending :-) SandyIvy

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/10/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for taking time to read.
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Sounds like the feeling was worth the sting. Nice poem. Good luck

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/1/2013 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the comment, and for wishing me luch.
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:13:00 AM
    Well that honey bee you were stung by must have had a poetic stinger because this is a lovely little poem

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 2/1/2013 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for a very lovely comment.