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First Signs of Love

What is this feeling that resides in me I’ve felt it before, but not quiet the same Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee When did Cupid pass that I did not see Certainly in this matter I have no shame What is this feeling that resides in me A nervousness I feel, coupled with glee I am smiling a lot, but am not to blame Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee The experience makes me feel very free But this moth has not eluded the flame What is this feeling that resides in me Something tells me, that I must decree Inside there’s a wildness I can’t tame Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee I’ve felt some joy, but not of this degree It must be real, yet it feels like a game What is this feeling that resides in me Was I stung by the sweetest honey bee Written by Wayland Bunch on 1/31/2013 for Valentine contest.

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Date: 12/11/2013 5:29:00 AM
LOL... no comment i notice you win a lot... congrats!!!
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 12/11/2013 5:44:00 AM
I have been fortunate with the contest I've entered. Thanks again for reading my work.
Date: 2/11/2013 10:42:00 AM
Good morning Wayland:-0, Congratulations with your awesome Valentines poem *luv~PD
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/11/2013 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your continued support and feedback.
Date: 2/11/2013 10:38:00 AM
congrats on the placement!!!!!~ sashi
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/11/2013 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Sashi for reading my poem and for your comment
Date: 2/11/2013 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win on this very lovely Valentines poem Wayland! love/hugs, Leonora
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/11/2013 2:06:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment and for reading my poem.
Date: 2/11/2013 3:39:00 AM
These are difficult to write, but your reward was great! Congratulations on your win Wayland.
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Date: 2/10/2013 9:00:00 PM
Awww, this is so cute, love it, congrats on your win, love debra
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/10/2013 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
Date: 2/10/2013 8:26:00 PM
I fell in love with the ending :-) SandyIvy
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/10/2013 9:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking time to read.
Date: 2/1/2013 1:28:00 PM
Sounds like the feeling was worth the sting. Nice poem. Good luck
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/1/2013 8:12:00 PM
Thank you for the comment, and for wishing me luch.
Date: 2/1/2013 4:13:00 AM
Well that honey bee you were stung by must have had a poetic stinger because this is a lovely little poem
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/1/2013 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for a very lovely comment.

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