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First School Dance

FIRST SCHOOL DANCE It was a dance Like any other Half the girls Danced with their brothers I stood there against the wall Tossing up a volleyball I leaned on the coke machine Then I saw him smart and lean Smiled at me--I felt the dart WOW I thought THIS IS THE START When he walked across the room Winter snow had magic bloom Blushes crept along my face As he neared my shadowy place Then he turned abruptly right His love object—Diet Sprite.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/6/2012 8:41:00 AM
A great write and very enjoyable read Victoria. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2012 12:28:00 AM
WAHGAH! It was so sweet and then....POW! Wow, this was a great, entertaining read. I am sorry if this happened! Though I have to laugh a little, it caught me off guard. Thanks for sharing us your clever work! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/5/2012 11:21:00 PM
hey, it's just like a commercial I saw once similar to this. How awful if this really happened to ya. haha. But I think this was just a good funny poem!! Guess what? I can't post a poem. My soupmail and member area also disappeared. Please can you tell me if you can do stuff?? I'm very worried.
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