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First Picnic

The rains have lasted all the spring. We’re longing for some sun. With advent of the end of school We look to June for fun. The kids have found their bathing suits And have them at the ready. It’s not fair in vacation time For rains to pour so steady. The first nice weekend that we have, We know where we’ll be going. They have the hampers all cleaned out For picnic food we’re stowing. I will rise early on that day And chicken I’ll be frying. They each will ask for favorite foods To please them, I’ll be trying. Their daddy will gas up the car And tell us all to hurry. He’ll want to go while sun is out And weather not a worry. We’re heading for Cranberry Lake Next to the picnic ground Separating the two waters. The other side is Puget Sound. It’s all part of Deception Park, Every visitor’s destination When they’re in Northwest Washington, One of most scenic states in Nation. There will be a crowd of other folks, All soaking up the sun And trying out the waters Eager for some summer fun. Our son will try the diving board To prove he can be bold, The girls will test lake gingerly and howl if it's too cold. They will have hearty appetites For all my picnic fixings. I will have brought potato salad And other salad mixing’s. Chocolate cake and water melon, Will be part of the desserts. By now we are so hungry We will eat until it hurts. We’ll go home at the end of day All happy and contented. It has been one more special time To keep us all cemented. For Carol's " Picnic Time"contest Won no. 4

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Date: 5/20/2011 10:58:00 PM
the yummy chicken picnic scores high! Congratulations, dear Joyce.
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:46:00 AM
Love the way you described this picnic, Joyce. A great time was had by all, even if they may have had too much fried chicken and potato salad. It's the contentment at the end of the day that makes a picnic so special. Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:47:00 AM
A wonderful write on picnic Joyce.. I loved your mentioning of strong family ties. Congrats on your win love, gautami
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:47:00 PM
Joyce, so great to see you near the top of the list with this classic. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, MOses
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:28:00 AM
Hi Carol- This is a nice description of an awesome outting, all the way down to the delicious dishes... The cementing of a family does occur by time spent, not necessarily on gifts and such...you got it right...contented and cemented!! Congrats- Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:16:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your well deserved win in the contest of Carol..
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:13:00 AM
ahhh "gingerly!" a most delightful scene and word! lovely win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:56:00 AM
super cheesr for the dazzling win, jiyce... impressive! :) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:18:00 AM
Great fun. Many congrats on your win, Joyce : )
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:00:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of Carol, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:51:00 AM
congrats on your win with this nice piece, love cory
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:02:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win in the picnic contest with this delightful write my friend.. full of fun and joy... and memories... enjoy your top spot for excellence my friend..luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 7:08:00 PM
this was a great lay out of a perfect day!! good job! cory
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Date: 5/14/2011 7:51:00 PM
enjoyed reading this one, very well written.
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Date: 5/14/2011 3:30:00 PM
Hungry and smiles come from this winner Joyce...luv Michael
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Date: 5/14/2011 2:35:00 PM
You have mentioned many of my favorites with fried chicken, watermelon and ESPECIALLY potato salad> I just LOVE that stuff. So do you use mayo or salad dressing, JOyce? I enjoyed your outing!! And thanks for telling me what is going on with you.
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