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First Love

Is there any greater feeling Than when you first discover you are in love And you realize your love is returned It's the most thrilling sensation in life Nothing else can even come close It's the highest of highs The ultimate of human experiences Exhilarating to the nth degree Makes you feel like running through the streets Yelling, “I'm in love, I'm in love, I'm in love!” You want to share the feeling with everyone you meet Sure can be embarrassing though Hugging total strangers Especially if they are of the same sex Eventually, people will try to avoid you They just have no idea They think you're some kind of looney toons Who has just escaped from the local asylum No matter... carry on! There is NO greater feeling JUST ENJOY! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 7/8/2014 5:51:00 AM
First love - it`s fine.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/14/2014 5:33:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by my friend!!!
Date: 6/2/2014 2:14:00 PM
Best feeling that there is..Welcome home
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/2/2014 5:10:00 PM
Thanks for the "welcome home" Tim! Great to go away... great to get back home! Thanks, Tim!
Date: 6/2/2014 11:31:00 AM
Hey Jack, i think this one is simple sounding and relates to our every life; there's nothing greater. 'let love lead' nice write. >>HENSHAW<<
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/2/2014 5:08:00 PM
Thanks a bunch my good friend, Ako! Your positive comments are very much appreciated! Cheers, Jack
Date: 6/2/2014 10:21:00 AM
Dragon just ran down the street yelling Jack's back! He wants you to write about every thing you saw.... I've been busy and started a Father's Day contest. Dragon has a Father's Day poem... I wrote about mermaids visiting Dragon... and a Edger Allen Poe like poem called 'Quote the Raven 'Nevermore'. The last 2 poems aren't up yet but will be soon! We MISSED YOU and Cathie.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/2/2014 5:04:00 PM
YUP! It's the old guy! Got a couple in the fire about our experiences! Tell Dragon to hang tight... my mind is still a bit mushy! Missed you guys too... loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 6/2/2014 9:32:00 AM
Aww Jack nothing beats a good hug and being in love :-) great write as ever my friend. Hugs as ever Jan xxxxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/2/2014 9:41:00 AM
Hey ho! It's my good friend Jan!!! Just got back from a one week holiday in the Dominican Rep. Hot hot hot! Humid, humid, humid! Now back to P-Soup and my good good friend Jan et al!!! Hope things are going well for you, sweet lady! Big whopping hugs and mucho love... Jack XOXOX

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