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First Love

To whom can i describe her when smiling? With northern eyes of ice blue that glisten, Her hair aflame against the wind beguiling Incantation from an angel, who listen, Endowed with contours of feminine styling In ancient times Venus she would be christen. Oh the love of my youth i will cherish Memories i keep will never perish. © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Date: 1/28/2011 4:01:00 AM
Such a beautiful evocative way with words you have xx
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Date: 1/5/2011 3:32:00 PM
what an awesome tribute for a first love, Harry!! A beauty! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/5/2011 5:22:00 AM
OMG Harry this is dramatic and emotional full of romantic lines and luv... such elegance early in the morning to read my friend.. ah those memories how they haunt us continually luv.. enjoyed my friend.. good luck in Jared's contest...
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Date: 1/4/2011 9:48:00 AM
Beautiful piece Harry... so enjoyed....Michael
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:46:00 AM
Harry, memories like this are meant to be cherished.. beautiful piece, this brought a smile to my face.. ;-) Wilma
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:35:00 AM
i meant, harry.. sorry.. just commented on C.L's and the soup site had a quick glitch
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:33:00 AM
is is february already, C.L? absolutely beautiful and very evocative of youth's love... splendid piece from your oiled quill..:) nette
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