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First Kiss

Is this kiss really bechanced? Or juvenile dreams come afresh. Her lips are rolling on my face; Or my soul is raising high. How I forgot that precious gift? Really! It was my 'initial maiden's kiss'. Hey! I will keep it forever in mind; whole will keep it all in life. I wonder what affinity between us! I seek that affection connecting us. I acquire it in butterflies on my rose; I heard it in the songs of bees. I hunt for it all in world …… I wish for it all in life! ! ! Last I found that finite thought; "Love!" which conceals in humans heart.

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Date: 11/29/2015 10:47:00 PM
Hi Jim, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Jim Pearl
Date: 12/2/2015 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Pandita! Me too enjoyed your works as well.
Date: 11/29/2015 10:04:00 PM
Hi Jim, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/28/2015 1:58:00 PM
WOW, what a sweet poem, Jim Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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