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First Kiss

Come here was the motion That rendered her helpless And placed her under a majestic spell Quiet eyes, half parted lips Dampening like rose petals Waiting to collect It's first drops of morning dew And a heart that flutters Like hummingbird wings As it delectably feasts Upon its precious nectar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/5/2014 8:47:00 AM
Beautifully written...love the imagery!
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Date: 9/17/2013 1:11:00 PM
CLASSICAL AND ROMANTIC. I ENJOYED IT. THANKS...JM
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Madelin Barton
Date: 5/27/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/16/2013 6:55:00 PM
AMAZING BEAUTIFUL PIECE I TIP THE HAT TO ITS BEAUTY
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Madelin Barton
Date: 5/27/2014 10:36:00 AM
Liam very encouraging words always thank you -Maddie
Date: 9/16/2013 12:08:00 PM
This was delicious w/that small tease of seduction. Ah, the simple pleasures. Excellent job!
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Madelin Barton
Date: 5/27/2014 10:38:00 AM
Love speaks to the heart, I just listen thank you for commenting on my poetry Maddie
Date: 9/16/2013 11:49:00 AM
Hi Madelin, A lovely romantic write that summons imagery.. Ken
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Madelin Barton
Date: 5/27/2014 10:38:00 AM
Thank you ken
Date: 9/16/2013 11:45:00 AM
- A sweet memory and an even more sweeter poem :))) - Have a nice Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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