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First Kiss

My first kiss was embarrassing, It was happen when my age is thirteen, Somebody ask to court me, And my heart beats rapidly. Awkwardness shows on my face, On my cheeks you can see its pinkish, And I feel like I’m the prettiest, So sudden, so sweet caress. Feel so good to experience, Still a kid and still innocent, First kiss, first happiness, Childhood memories I will cherish. Written for Craig Cornish’s "First Kiss Contest" My Theme: First Kiss Written: 08/12/2012 By: Maria Paz Samelo Honorable Mention Winner

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Date: 8/23/2012 6:20:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:32:00 PM
well, I see congratulations are in order on your first kiss poem. WAY to GO. You told the story enchantingly.
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Date: 8/22/2012 1:07:00 PM
A lovedly kiss to cherish. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/22/2012 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Mary Paz. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2012 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend!!!!!!
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Date: 8/22/2012 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mary xx
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Date: 8/14/2012 1:48:00 PM
Innocence is so obvious here and very sweet , xx
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/14/2012 11:10:00 PM
thanks friend Mandy...Have a nice day!!
Date: 8/14/2012 5:12:00 AM
Love this Mary, innocents is the word i use for this beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/14/2012 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much friend Harry :)
Date: 8/12/2012 8:08:00 PM
You wrote a very fantastic poem, Marry!Good luck my dear friend!
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/14/2012 11:08:00 PM
thanks friend..God bless!!

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