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First Frost

The rose’s petals were stiff and brittle, a gift from some northern wind, and though this fate I should not belittle, the spite I could not defend. Nonetheless I felt anger settle, loss that would never mend, beautiful flower is now nettle, the start to a colder trend.

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Date: 12/11/2013 3:05:00 AM
Yes, the question is, can the Rose be replaced by the rOse... or the roSe... or the rosE...Alas, James, alas...
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