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You walked towards me, shoulders rolling, silently you paced, those moon disc eyes intent, without a blink, I stroked your back, caressed an ear, in turn, you licked my face, sandpaper tongue, a shade of brightest pink. Formalities over, you lay and rolled onto your back, tickled your tum, you rocked from left to right, grabbing an arm you nipped my hand, playful, not an attack, expression on your face of pure delight. Then suddenly you jumped up, turned, and shot into a tree, kept calling me 'till I was out of range, but deep inside my heart I knew that we could never be, because, compared to other girls, you're strange........

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Date: 6/3/2018 6:48:00 AM
Purrfect.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/3/2018 11:02:00 PM
Just like you, Jean x
Date: 5/17/2018 7:07:00 AM
Come now Viv, I feel the longing in your words, strange can sometimes be a very good thing. Loved the write.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/3/2018 11:02:00 PM
Thanks, James.
Date: 5/16/2018 1:22:00 PM
Hmm. Got me on this one, perhaps a hoot of a woman? Prob a bad guess lol But a very well written poem...!
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Date: 5/10/2018 5:57:00 PM
G'day Viv ... you didn't write in her address. Here I was thinking it was a climbing labrador, until I realized there must have been a fancy dress party going on - this poem is a ripper Viv - Lindsay
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Date: 5/10/2018 8:47:00 AM
Loved it Viv, I think it s a cat as well but had me until the end wondering, well done xxoo
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Date: 5/10/2018 6:33:00 AM
Oh my! This is an interesting poem Viv. You kept my attention with this one :)
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Date: 5/10/2018 5:20:00 AM
I would have gone with Jan and Carole and said Celeste ,if not then please tell us, I'm intrigued. Tom
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Date: 5/10/2018 3:03:00 AM
ooh err Mr Viv if it's not a cat I am getting worried she sounds like a teasing little monkey whoever she is lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2018 9:43:00 PM
Has to be a cat! I enjoyed this one so much, Viv.
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