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First Date

On the 14th of February Red became our national flag candles melted and died Bottles gave generously theirs Our faces like millennium jack and rose i did give her a red rose that i may come close but her emotions froze as if she off, doze it ended as it started a first date with no date with no soul mate against fate her name was Kate

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Date: 7/2/2011 11:22:00 AM
interesting piece, best of luck in the contest if that is your intent
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