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First Date

On the 14th of February
Red became our national flag
candles melted and died
Bottles gave generously theirs
Our faces like millennium jack and rose
i did give her a red rose
that i may come close
but her emotions froze
as if she off, doze
it ended as it started
a first date
with no date
with no soul mate
against fate
her name was Kate

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  1. Date: 7/2/2011 11:22:00 AM
    interesting piece, best of luck in the contest if that is your intent