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First Dance Footle

first dance deep trance love young just sprung controlled untold one day in May from sir fresh fleur 9 February 2022 A Strand ( 1068) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 1st place

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2022 12:40:00 AM

You have given me an idea for a poem. Congrats on POTD - belatedly! Snicker. Snicker.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/22/2022 4:52:00 AM

Sweet. Congrats on your POTD, JCB.

Silent One

Date: 2/18/2022 2:18:00 PM

Clever use of words...

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/15/2022 1:38:00 PM

Oh this was fun; enjoyed the write.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2022 7:39:00 PM

Congrats on POTD, JCB!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/10/2022 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD honour, JCB. Well done! You gave this form a new dimension - a story.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2022 11:40:00 PM

Con gratulation, JCB, love them all.

John Watt

Date: 2/9/2022 4:32:00 PM

So many emotions in so few words... a challenging form but so nicely rendered. I like the last 2 lines best. Congrats for your POTD!

Constance La France

Date: 2/9/2022 1:42:00 PM

JCB, very nice and congratulations on your win in the contest and receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/9/2022 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD! Blessings ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/9/2022 11:09:00 AM

So lovely! Congratulations, JCB. This is a fave. :) Evelyn

Warren Doll

Date: 2/9/2022 10:42:00 AM

JCB, congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/9/2022 10:04:00 AM

"first dance, young love" This is so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/9/2022 9:39:00 AM

JCB, you have packed so much lovely meaning into these few syllables. Footles are a real challenge for me; you make them LOOK easy! CONGRATS, well-deserved. Janice

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/9/2022 9:23:00 AM

Love this JCB !! First dance deep trance … yes very cool ! Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/9/2022 9:08:00 AM

Back with congratulations on POTD

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/9/2022 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD! Fascinating~I have never done a Footle before~you have inspired me. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/9/2022 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD win. I loved dancing through your "First Dance Footle" write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Valsa George

Date: 2/9/2022 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations once more on this poem honored as Poem of the Day. Enjoy the double honor dear friend !

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/9/2022 6:59:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/9/2022 6:47:00 AM

I like the Footle form myself, great write, JCB, congrats on POTD!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2022 5:12:00 AM

I am certain Brian will be pleased with this charming and romantic poem written in his form. Footles are a challenge, but oh so much fun to read and memorable too. Congratulations on having this delightful poem honored with POTD! I loved it JCB. Blessings xxoo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/9/2022 4:00:00 AM

Congratulations again!

Joseph May

Date: 2/9/2022 2:28:00 AM

Congrats on POTD

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/9/2022 12:39:00 AM

A very addictive form, you write one and have to keep going. Congratulations JCB on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom