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First Dance

Her father did loom She floated across the room... Toes bruised by the groom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/13/2010 4:24:00 PM
Oh very cute Robb... wonderful imagery and great visual presence my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:44:00 PM
Funny and humorous haiku - very creative, Robb
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