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First Breath After Death

I used to live, within a dream a small cog in the consumer machine materialism dazzled, with an intriguing gleam I wanted so much, I nearly burst at the seam. Then I awakened a voice inside which promised to take me on a much greater ride I wasn't sad....when the old me, he died It was with joy not sorrow, I sat there and cried. A second chance, I'm born again alleviation of all of that pain I've been cleansed, by a conscious rain which opened the Pineal bit of brain. I felt alive, but I acted dead I took little notice of anything said, Now, I find my own truths instead spoken by a voice inside my own head. The transition was mightily fast 27years changed, after one night had passed I never knew I was only flying at half mast thinkin' I was winnin' but really comin' last! But truth's not heard if you walk with the herd can't fly freely, or soar like a bird if you believe, every single damn word. The message which now flows through me is filled with a positive and sacred Divinity. I swam the sea of despair, as if it wasn't even there I crossed the abyss of wisdom, on a shaky rope bridge I sipped from the fountain of knowledge and I drank it dry, I now feel really high why don't you give it a try? Kiss that old life goodbye, Life's so much better, after you die!! A poem by John-Ovan.P.Hull to be entered in the Coming of Age poetry contest. ©John-Ovan.P.Hull

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 9:14:00 PM
JOHN... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:10:00 AM
Hope you did all enjoy, I enjoyed writing that one, I've still not managed a 1st place..yet...will try harder!
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:43:00 PM
[shiver] it's a bit frightening what it takes to get us to enjoy life. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/27/2012 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest John-Ovan. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 10:39:00 AM
Facinating and unique poem. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 2/27/2012 9:30:00 AM
congrats John on an outstanding win for this creative write luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:15:00 PM
John, wonderful write, from start to finish. I especially liked the last stanza. Wonderful. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/23/2012 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Samual, I was trying to end it on an inspiring tone, looks like I achieved it :)
Date: 2/21/2012 8:54:00 PM
congrats John on an HM for this brilliant poetic art luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest John-Ovan. Love, Carol
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