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First Born

Joyous occasion was his birth as he was the first to give me the title of "Mom" Obstinate in his teenage years he has become Sarcasm is his wit Each day brings something new Phemonally smart is his gift Hates to ever admit he is wrong Really loves his video games Oblivious to the workings of common courtesy no matter how hard I try otherwise Baby he may no longer be but he is my baby just the same Ever ready to be out of school Really knows how to push my buttons Takes too much for granted but he is still very special to me just the same

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Colleen Bono

Date: 12/17/2009 9:02:00 PM

Awesome write.Hope all is well with you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2009 11:16:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured. Hard period of any person's life and family life. Keep lines of communications open. Sara

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/22/2009 6:51:00 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

James Fraser

Date: 8/18/2009 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured Kristy, excellent write by the Southern Belle>>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/18/2009 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations, Kristy on having your poem featured this week. Teenagers, we love them into adulthood... hopefully! Smiling, Dane

Veronica Joseph

Date: 8/17/2009 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations - just keep telling yourself: their brains are not mature until they are 25. It easier to deal with then!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2009 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kristy. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/7/2009 1:36:00 AM

Great qualities and sounds like a typical teenager. Motherhood sets the tone to this superb write. I agree with Aleera, you have talent and you are demonstrating that you have tapped into it. I hope you keep writing and delve into poetry with a passion. I can only hope you will, good luck and God bless you and your family...Raul

Ellia Fields

Date: 4/6/2009 11:15:00 PM

Wow this is amazing.....keep on writing!!!!!!!

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 4/6/2009 9:28:00 PM

Very nice sis, see I TOLD YOU you have talent, keep it up, and since I know Joey, this is RIGHT ON THE MONEY!!!!!!! Love, Leerie

John Rhinem

Date: 4/6/2009 8:15:00 PM

Smile~I see how You love Your Son! Whether or not he is the same love from Your first poem I read? Does not really matter~I still seem the same wonderful motherly love there! And, he sounds somewhat like your typical teenage boy! Smile~So, nothing to worry about there! Although, it does sound as though he may be a little bit intelligent~Smile~don't let him outwit you~Smile~"Good To Meet You Kristy! Keep Writing Dear Lady! "Warmth & Blessings To You All, John!:) Bye Dear ~

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/6/2009 4:31:00 PM

Your first born he sounds beautiful. There nothing like the love for a child enjoy the years ahead and treasure each stage of his life! It moves fast! Laura :)