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First Born - Redux

What of those dreams that in our mind Seek distant hopes and in them find That love and life may be combined Awakening, our thoughts commence Become aware in sweet suspense Of all that new life represents For as the coming years unfold Despite what history may mold Remains a future yet untold And so, in timid confidence Of still unproven competence Uneasily face providence ‘Til broaching wisdom born of birth Exposes fundamental worth Of all that’s meaningful on Earth And in that moment of delight To smile absurdly at the sight When everything in life … is right Apologies for not taking the time to do this right the first time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/1/2018 7:23:00 AM
Very special words of a very special time,takes me back to the first time my wonderful husband cried.Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us ,now there are tears in my eyes.
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Brian Densham
Date: 10/1/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 8/1/2018 7:07:00 AM
Awesome discourse on love and life..I found your poem quite enlightening, Brian.
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Brian Densham
Date: 8/1/2018 4:35:00 PM
Your praise means much to me. Thank you

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