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First Date

FIRST DATE Her name was Judy McCormick, she was fourteen - barely I was also fourteen, but claimed to be fifteen She was slim, pretty with shortish dark brown hair, Almond eyes, loveliest I'd ever seen And a soft sweet smile, I just knew she would be nice Noticed her in the movies, one glance followed another Found ourselves laughing at the same things we’d see After the theatre walked her home with her little brother Would she come again next week with me ? She said yes. I felt ten feet tall We met at the theatre as arranged, it had rained We went dutch. I bought her ice cream after a while. We watched Steve Reeves in HERCULES UNCHAINED Cant recall the plot, only her eyes and smile Kissed her secretly in the dark - salty, gently. In those days sex hadn’t been invented. We walked home hand in hand and kissed again at her door Yeah, corny, improbable, but true - virginity undented How did the first date end? We both were delighted and more With ourselves and decided to arrange another date. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for Carol Brown’s Contest “My First Date”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/16/2011 8:11:00 AM
I remember this one from reading it before. Congratulations and I forgot to ask you, did you become her boyfriend?
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Sidney Beck
Date: 7/16/2011 1:34:00 PM
aw shucks we went out together several times and then it fizzled...l o l
Date: 7/15/2011 3:45:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Sydney
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:26:00 PM
thanks for allowing a third party along on your date, nice write, from a much simpler time
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:25:00 AM
Hey you were fourteen too and like with me, thankfully (I say) sex had not been invented. I wish they could make young love like this again. I see today's pre teens with their cell phones and sexting and the stupid little bands they wear on their arms to denote how "far" they go with guys. All the innocence and beauty of first love has gone out of the world of the modern teen. I hope there are still some out there that have virtue.
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:46:00 PM
too sweet, just love it, especially the sex hadn't been invented yet line........good luck in the contest
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