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Oh, fleeting fireflies, glowing gems of night, elusive sparks that celebrate day's end, your mini fireworks rise before my eyes erupting out of nowhere in the dark like flashing souls against a sky of black. Like fireflies, I will glow in dark of night, a brilliant spark to celebrate the end, with bursting fireworks lighting up my soul, its luminescence, blinding still my heart, as death's adventure lifts me to the stars. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: The Fire Inside Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Judged: 11/13/2017 ~3rd Place~ Premiere Contest: Fireworks For Me Sponsor: Julia Ward Judged: 06/13/2016

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Date: 11/14/2017 4:42:00 AM
This is such a charming take on mortality, Sandra, and I loved it! Congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/14/2017 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/13/2017 9:36:00 PM
Wow, great twist on the last line, Sandra. Lovely. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:37:00 PM
I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, Line! I appreciate your positive comments and congrats! Sandra
Date: 11/13/2017 5:26:00 PM
EXCELLENT, Sandra! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 11/19/2017 5:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/13/2017 3:25:00 PM
A lovely poem Sandra, congrats :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gary! Sandra
Date: 11/17/2016 8:27:00 AM
So very beautiful, Sandra. Congratulations. ...Fran
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Date: 11/15/2016 1:42:00 PM
So beautiful, Sandra! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 11/15/2016 9:52:00 AM
Sandra this beautiful and CONGRATULATIONS ~
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Date: 11/14/2016 9:54:00 PM
I enjoyed your echoing stanzas! Congrats, Sandra!
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:00:00 AM
You are the firework. I like the climax of death. No fear, just stars. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/13/2016 12:10:00 PM
I can feel the crescendo of your last moments! Nicely done! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2016 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend drawn with loving colors. A great congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:54:00 AM
A lovely poem that I heard while reading it, thanks to your recording. The last line has lovely upward motion making an already thrilling poem surpass itself! My congratulations, Sandra, on your third place win in my contest. Julia, x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/13/2016 12:00:00 PM
Hi, Julia, thank you so much for another inspiring contest, and for liking my poem enough to rate a 3rd Place win on your very short winner's list! I am very honored and I enjoyed writing a poem for your contest. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 6/13/2016 11:52:00 AM
Lovely and well written... congratulations on your win...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/13/2016 12:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janis. I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/13/2016 11:41:00 AM
Deep and beautifully stated Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/13/2016 12:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, James! Sandra
Date: 6/8/2016 5:40:00 PM
Oh nice !!! Simply gorgeous, Sandra. I love this take on Fireworks! :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 12:22:00 PM
Wow - you've done it again, Sandra - Wowed me! CayCay
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Date: 6/5/2016 1:38:00 AM
How beautiful!! This is very unique.. Good luck in the contest, dear Sandra!! :) :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2016 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Sneha, for your nice comment and good wishes for the contest. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/2/2016 9:23:00 PM
Profound.... lovely... soul-stirring...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Probir. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Sandra
Date: 6/2/2016 6:26:00 PM
Oh, goodie, I was first to read AND listen to your voice on this one. SO COOl to hear people this way!! I have to tell you. My daugher's mother-in-law sounds like YOU!! Truly. You sound very much like her. She is a very good woman! LOVELY poem.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2016 1:36:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Glad that you liked hearing me read the poem. I love this new feature! Hugs, Sandra

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