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Fireflies in night, so bright, Frolicking 'neath moon's light, Favorite eyes, goodnight, Fireflies humming at lamps, Fireflies' soft lullaby, Fairyland's call, don't cry, Fireflies guard you all night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/15/2023 11:44:00 AM
Every line a fine description of firefly--aptly done! BIG congrats on your win, Jay.
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Date: 9/15/2023 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jay! Discriptive with storyline, the picture is cutest. hugs
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Date: 9/14/2023 6:38:00 PM
Big congrats, my friend
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:31:00 PM
Sweet picture to go along with your sweet poem Jay. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/14/2023 11:01:00 AM
- So glad I found this on the winners list...it was one of my favorites - Congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:15:00 AM
Very nicely penned Jay, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/13/2023 12:26:00 AM
AHhhhhhhhhhh the fireflies guarding the sweet child sets off your lovely poem perfectly Jay. Well done.
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Date: 9/12/2023 9:43:00 PM
Enjoyed. All the best. Have Good Days.
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Date: 9/12/2023 5:01:00 PM
A nice verse on Fireflies, Jay. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/12/2023 1:10:00 PM
a romantic verse on fireflies, or I could say nostalgic. I love that insect!
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Date: 9/12/2023 11:38:00 AM
- A sweet one, Jay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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