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FireFlower

In the half-light's gentle hue, I find solace in the sighs of you, as winking stars gossip of length of purpose, and width of possibilities that challenge us- as one of love's melodies beginning to surface- as renewal remedy, a phoenix returned, tuned in to propose recognition of self's selfless ashes burned; cognition to the ways you have- Saintly urn about you, an auric aurora world unique to you, turns each glance heavenward, a brow arched like a curious child, each heartbeat a soft echo - smile sympathetic sonar to porpoise the ocean wild. Your countenance is remembrance of promises whispered long ago, where we embraced in the moon's soft afterglow gaze, our souls intertwined in the flow, grazing satellites to synthesis a gardens growth. Like petals of a delicate pansy in peacock mode, our love in full bloom grows and grows, done waiting for the other shoe to drop, the fertility of hope and faith has redeemed our tandem crop- with every touch and every kiss, every broken bone, we find eternal chance to be one, not a broken bone, but never broken, never alone, a harvest of Love's green thumb. In the business of the day and the silence of the night, we find comfort in each other- in each other's light, a love so pure and love that I hope contagiently imbues an eternal flame that will forever spread like wildflowers with true colors burning bright and pigment turning true.

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Date: 4/3/2024 4:14:00 AM
Romantic lines penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your very descriptive and expressive lines with us. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
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Jude Herrick
Date: 4/3/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 3/25/2024 7:38:00 AM
poem beautifully captures the essence of love and the profound connection shared between two individuals. From the opening lines, the imagery of finding solace in the gentle hues of twilight sets a serene and intimate tone, inviting the reader into a world where love is celebrated and cherished.
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/25/2024 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One.
Date: 3/25/2024 2:11:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning and so heartfelt, i love how every poem of yours have a very different theme and energy to it, and this gives a very passionate and dreamy vibe, and your use of flowers and metaphors to express is beyond captivating! I thought of my beloved as i read your well crafted lines. And fireflower, i used flowers but iv never used that, that’s brilliant! And creative: and i love the pansy and peacock line so much. And how youv painted imagery too, showing moons soft glow, to enhance the soulful ambience of the poem. Just breathtaking and so touching! The ending is beautiful too. A fave this is for me
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/25/2024 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Ink Empress. I chuckled, as I wrote the meta-analogy of fanned out and strutting peacockery. Lol.

Book: Shattered Sighs