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Fireflies Tree

December yet kissed Fireflies scattered lights on trees Shared soothe, wise in bliss Peace Emblematic Suits the gentleness in sipped Lights forked, sheltered tip Author's Note: I saw a gorgeous tree shimmered by its lights on my way back home, I can't take my eyes on it, and it was really like a Fireflies tree, gorgeous in peace :D ~I change this haiku format into free verse for the contest, hopefully it still nailed it :D ************************************************************* Honorable Mention Kindle the Lights Free Poetry Contest Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi *************************************************************

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest Yanny. Love Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 12/5/2012 6:40:00 AM

This is very beautiful poem with a very lovely image of fireflies! I love it and I extremely enjoyed reading it my dear Yanny! My hearty congratulations on your win! love and hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2012 2:00:00 AM

Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2012 8:11:00 PM

congrats Yanny on winning an HM for light theme .. lovely lines luv..

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/4/2012 9:03:00 PM

And wishing you a great day :D

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/4/2012 9:02:00 PM

Thank you Linda, and congratz on your win too

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 4:50:00 PM

Yanny, ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/4/2012 5:03:00 PM

Thank you Linda, it's really a pleasure to have a visit by you :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/2/2012 5:35:00 PM

A dream at night I can see it! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2012 2:51:00 PM

what a wonderful sight it must have been . NICE imagery.

Jacob Cra

Date: 11/27/2012 11:36:00 AM

Lovely poem... oh and just so you know I actually AM only twelve years old... but I am very responsible and mature. :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 4:42:00 PM

Sure you are Jacob, your maturity slightly seen in every verses which you wrote in your poem, so I have a new favourite poet to list :D-hug, Yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/27/2012 7:46:00 AM

Creative Haiku, well written Yanny. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Anne, glad to see you in here as well, brighten up my day :)- Hug, Yanny

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/26/2012 11:20:00 PM

nice Haiku Yanny ;}

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 12:18:00 AM

Thank you Debbie for your kindly visit to my page, I will visit to your poem as well :)-hug, Yanny

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 12:18:00 AM

Thank you Debbie for your kindly visit to my page, I will visit to your poem as well :)-hug, Yanny

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2012 10:06:00 PM

Yanny, good haiku... always~pd

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 12:15:00 AM

Thank you very much PD, thank's for stopping by to my page

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2012 5:23:00 PM

Very creative way of expressing the idea.Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were very encouraging..Sara

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2012 11:01:00 AM

Yanny very well done with the image here, (though I have never seen a firefly)....David

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/26/2012 10:13:00 AM

Sounds beautiful!

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2012 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Richard, the view is beautiful too for me :D, glad that you stop by :D - Hug, Yanny

Joseph May

Date: 11/26/2012 10:09:00 AM

nice write Yanny....hope you were able to take a picture...

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2012 10:27:00 AM

I hope so Joseph, but I cannot share pictures in here *sad, but hopefully this haiku able to cope the imagination sight of yours, thank you for stopping by Joseph :D-Hug, Yanny